Age/Gender: 29, Female
Location: your face (Texas)
Job: Med student
GO home to your mother. Doesn't she ever watch you?! Tell your mother this isn't some communist daycare center. Tell your mother I hate her! Tell your mother... I HATE YOU!! p.s. I love kitties! xoxox ^_^
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Whistle Status: Garbage
Exp. Points: 980 / 1,110
Exp. Rank #: 37,359
Voting Pow.: 5.21 votes
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Flash Reviews: 22
Music Reviews: 0
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22 Reviews | 8 w/ Responses
Really liked your story, drawing style, & coloring. The music selection was perfect. Great job! I loved it.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm really happy about it. maybe I'll hit it big time.
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I love this... and all your other submissions. :) Being Persian, your humor hits close to home (my parents love your stuff too). Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response:
hahaha good to hear...Thanks!!
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The voice acting was mediocre at best. (the emotion was too forced and came out sounding unnatural) The drawings were nice. The animation was too stiff. Try working on the fluidity of the walking characters. Interesting concept, just needs more work in my opinion.
Author's Response:
well, I was going for Dan Aykroyed, but he wasn't available. lol. All voice acting here is mediocre. glad you liked the concept.
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Great job! I loved the game. The music was good too! Maybe you could have different music at different levels to change it up a bit. Or add more attack styles. All in all I loved it. Kept me playing even when I should be studying... ;)
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Thanks!!!
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I liked this!
Just a suggestion...
You could modify the part when the flash is in public judgement (blam/protect). Maybe add a bit with different people exacting judgement while it's on the conveyor belt (e.g. People standing there with various weapons bludgeoning the flash (BLAMs) & a couple people hand it flowers, kisses, candy, shields, etc (protecting it). That way by the end the bad flash has taken a beating and looks like the animation in the Obits section. (or the good flash makes it out with nothing but a black eye or bandaid) I'm sure you get the picture. ;)
Author's Response:
i'm not gonna change it now but 4 next time i'll think about it thanks
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Not bad, my only issue is with the cheesy voiceovers. "waahoo," etc. You might want to write something better.
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There is not much story at the beginning but trust me i have the whole idea in my head
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I loved the black n white style and the drawings were great! If you haven't heard of Edward Gorey, you might want to check him out. He did interesting illustrations. Your work reminded me of his style. :)
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Never heard of him- I shall go look him up now ^-^ I think I will like him.
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That was funny as hell. Who doesn't love random weirdness & unexpected acts of violence?
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Ehhhh, apparently some people who reviewed didn't, but I'm glad you did.
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